Обо всем, но кратко

[Kali-nai]

Сегодня днем я почувствовала себя в квесте. А мама дома в это время пыталась топить зиму утюгом. Вороны, то ли почувствовал начало весны, то ли празднуя февраль, огромной стаей кружились над моим домом. У меня все болит, но уже сейчас я чувствую, что мне значительно лучше, чем неделю назад. Я решила учиться писать кратко и объявить этот месяц месяцем коротких постов, картинок и песен.
А по совету Hemem буду делать маленькие записи на английском о неинтересном и бытовом.

English

My day began at 2 p.m. I done some exersises and went for a walk. There was very cold outside but for me it wasn't problem. It was very good day because it was very interesting.

My mistakes:
I've done - done is the 3d form of "to do", it's used with have/has/had anyway )
It wasn't A problem - i can't explain the rule now but an article here is the must ) Also, it was A very good day )

Correst text: My day began at 2 p.m. I have done some exersises and went for a walk. There was very cold outside but for me it wasn't a problem. It was a very good day because it was very interesting.

@настроение: Задумчивое

@темы: мысли, some words, размышления, поговорим о том, "чего нет"?, городской призрак, о земном

Comments

[Hemem]

Do you mind if I correct some little mistakes? )))

[Kali-nai]

Hemem, I will say 'Thank you very much' if you do it ^^

[Hemem]

I've done - done is the 3d form of "to do", it's used with have/has/had anyway )
It wasn't A problem - i can't explain the rule now but an article here is the must ) Also, it was A very good day )

everything else just perfect )

[Kali-nai]

Hemem, I've done - done is the 3d form of "to do", it's used with have/has/had anyway )
Oh... Yes. I forgot it ^^"
It wasn't A problem - i can't explain the rule now but an article here is the must ) Also, it was A very good day )
I will correct it. Thank you!)))

everything else just perfect )
I'm glad to read it ^__^

[Hemem]

You HAVE forgot it )))) that little "ve" is important ))

[Kali-nai]

Hemem, may be 'have forgotten', no?

[Hemem]

yep, sorry. forgotten )

[Kali-nai]

Hemem, Ok) I will remember it)